[ooc: muse critique + notes]

[yutti]

I'm too chicken to do it on a meme again but I do appreciate feedback (plus I keep seeing other people do it which reminded me) so I'm just going to have this one permanently here. Feel free to use it whenever you want for whatever you want, anon is on and comments are screened, and I'm happy to discuss it over a PM or AIM as well.

☆彡Characterization
★彡Writing style
☆彡Anything else